kol: (ZOMG)
kol ([personal profile] kol) wrote in [personal profile] impersona 2010-03-04 05:56 pm (UTC)

EEEEE

I JUST

NO WORDS

EEEEEE

Seriously, Loni is spot on here, and I really love Val's running commentary throughout. Especially weaving in his thoughts on the whole Brian situation, and how the guardians find themselves drawn to him in different ways. And the bits with the hat were so charming and so THEM it made me clap my hands in delight. Or at least I would if I hadn't been scrolling down frantically for the next bits ;).

Loni's text response is my second favorite bit. It just captures everything about her in three words. I don't know how you managed it, but that's precisely what she'd do. PRECISELY.

But my favorite bit is this what follows:

"Oh Loni." Val sank back against the brick wall, shrinking into the collar of his jacket. "That kind of answer is totally not absolutely suspicious at all."


Val, you are utterly adorkable. You get such a firm look at his character there and it is entirely too entertaining for words. Just supremely well done. <3

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