mindsplinters: (Hotel Constants)
mindsplinters ([personal profile] mindsplinters) wrote in [personal profile] impersona 2010-03-11 10:35 pm (UTC)

AND THE VAL'S HEART GREW TEN SIZES THAT DAY.

I ADORE THIS AND IT IS CANON NOW.

That said, I think one of the best things about it really is how believable everyone is. You nailed the characters, I think, and the dialogue is clever while still being balanced with emotions and sensory sections. It's very human and sweet. It also shows Val's insecurities and hang-ups without slapping us with them. It's subtle and validating somehow.

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