alzbeta: (Hell's angels)
Alzbeta. ([personal profile] alzbeta) wrote in [personal profile] impersona 2009-12-15 01:34 pm (UTC)

I'm a little late to this party, but I have to throw in my two cents. I definitely think this has potential for a longer piece. It's such a tense moment, and so private in its way. You're very good at writing those little hidden/stolen moments, and it always leaves me wanting more. I really hope you come back to this one!

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