This is brilliantly apropos. It's a tight piece about a single twisted emotion. It's hard to know you're incomplete and still feel like you should be doing something important. This really comes across in your words.
(PS. On a nitpicky level, I think you have a verb disagreement in the line about Axel.)
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Date: 2010-03-07 07:18 am (UTC)(PS. On a nitpicky level, I think you have a verb disagreement in the line about Axel.)