I agree with Kol. There is so much potential here that, if you want, I would totally support you going back to this and tweaking and adding. It shows the layers of emotion and the uncomfy distance and relation and you just know that nothing is ever going to be quite the same again.
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Date: 2009-12-13 05:48 pm (UTC)