I'm a little stupid right now due to lack of sleep, myself, but I couldn't let this lie another day without saying how much I love your dialogue. It's always very believable, and witty without being pretentious or seeming forced. There are moments in this piece that made me laugh and pieces that hurt me for your characters... that's a combination I truly adore, you know. Keep up the great work, hon. Don't let the bastards holiday shoppers grind you down!
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Date: 2009-12-23 04:40 pm (UTC)bastardsholiday shoppers grind you down!