impersona: (Galen's parrot army)
impersona ([personal profile] impersona) wrote2009-08-22 10:09 pm
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she says the satellite is coming

Holy crap I wrote another thing!  It's for the LJ community Sandbox Fiction, which is a constructive crit/kick our asses into writing gear community.  

Uh going to C/P the write-up for the story I did there.  It's of Roimata, who I've GOT to get properly submitted this week.  I only have his writing sample to finish yet I wrote this.   Sage Fail.

Title:  Whalesong (Google Docs)
Rating: PG
Author: [info]she_who_is_soc 
Genre: Science Fiction
Disclaimer: This is for a world derived from the online writing RP Et Ego In Arcadia.  The setting's world is Ida, though the main character is the guardian of a different world.  Who uh, I need to finish the application for.     
Warnings/comments:   Cursing is really the only warning here. 
Music is greater than an act, than an art.  A young man thinks he needs to be taught this. 
Also note that I will almost always be pushing the deadline with submissions T_T it seems to be how I write, plus I'm coming out of a severe writer's coma (thank you for curing this, Sandbox!)  This is also more of a character study than a proper story, but I hope to fix my approach for next month. 



[personal profile] d00mpixie 2009-08-23 06:32 am (UTC)(link)
I commented on HellJay, but I'mma comment here too because I can. <3

OMG LOVE THIS. <333 I love how you got the feel of Ida and New Eleusia -- the city is chockablock full of intellectuals and even most of the little Folk guttersnipes have had at least some schooling, but it's still rather like a post-punk Dickensian ghetto at the bottom of a caldera. (I adore Way, he's so totally Idan XD) And of course I love Roi and Adelita to pieces. ^____^

And as I said at the other place, I really love how you got music. I wish more musicians understood that simple fact. <3